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Sharon Graham's avatar

I might be late to this conversation since this is chapter 3 so I apologise.

If your current title is Dragons, Deceit and Desire ….. I would prefer Deceit, Desire and Dragons. I would put the emotions first.

I’m not sure where ‘mutants’ fit in so I’ll keep out of that.

The chapter represents the silliness of the youngest sisters very nicely.

By the way, every idea to dispatch Wickham, as soon as possible, is a good idea. X

Terri McClelland's avatar

Cheryl pointed out my first observation so that’s done. I’m all for incinerating Wickham as soon as possible. Maybe Lydia will be (unfortunately) in his clutches at the same time and get fried too. Just kidding…my bad! But she is definitely cruising for some kind of trouble. She makes Kitty look like a reasonable young lady. This is a good chapter for showing her frivolous behavior and Mrs. B’s contribution to that.

Need to know a little more about the story before making title recommendations. Is it Jane who is the mutant? That would help to know.

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