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Cimora Black's avatar

OK, I've been reading all the comments and understand that people are a bit confused.

First, this is supposed to be a short story, not a novel.

Second, things are moving fast because my mind tends to run ahead rather than walk slowly when writing. Later, I go back and edit the draft... several times, at which point the story will hopefully make sense and be cohesive.

Third, this Regencyesque fantasy world was built in the following: 'Born to Serve,' 'Jane: A Born to Serve Bonus Chapter,' and 'Mistaken Heart.

Fourth, Lydia and Caro are evil by dragon standards. Their complete selfishness is an indicator of their corrupt minds, not their sexual proclivities. Dragons are all in favor of sex... the more the better. The selfish behavior of these females ultimately leads to the ruination of the Bennet family.

Finally, I am a SOTP writer, have always been one, except in college, where I had to write many papers for History, English, and Philosophy, which required structure and analysis more than imagination. Because the standard HEA is when ODC marry, this story takes us beyond that scenario. They are already married. How this ends is up for grabs. The next chapter is going to get further into the realm of "What the Heck?"

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Yep, Hopefully, Lydia does not ruin this for them. Someone needs to know what she has been doing and correct her.

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