Really cool! So Wickham got to beat Elizabeth because her father didn’t teach her about her heritage? Color me surprised. Not. I’m glad she went to Darcy willingly so she didn’t miss her own marriage consummation. My favorite part was the dragon tattoos and each has the other’s dragon. And these are some very powerful dragons!
I am loving it! Well, except for the part with the fanged biting. Reminds me too much of vampires. Was it the dragons taking over and morphing their bodies to produce fangs?
This is very different from the usual P&P! But I like it. Very much. Though I’m not sure I’d enjoy having a couple dragons watching me consummate my marriage.
While the notion of the tattoos is inventive and interesting, the scene itself is a bit unclear. How long does the tattoo take to be complete? Are they screaming the entire time? Is it screaming in pain or in ecstasy?
Perhaps the dream time where Kyra instructs Elizabeth should be relayed in some part to the reader? That way you could set out the rules for the magic system, needed dragon lore, etc to orient the reader into the world you're creating.
Really cool! So Wickham got to beat Elizabeth because her father didn’t teach her about her heritage? Color me surprised. Not. I’m glad she went to Darcy willingly so she didn’t miss her own marriage consummation. My favorite part was the dragon tattoos and each has the other’s dragon. And these are some very powerful dragons!
I am loving it! Well, except for the part with the fanged biting. Reminds me too much of vampires. Was it the dragons taking over and morphing their bodies to produce fangs?
Yes. The dragons can morph their hosts bodies partially or fully.
Good question. Or the mystery food and drink changes them somehow? Plus venom. Or maybe it’s something passed on from parent to child?
Wow! This story is so unusual for me at least. Very interesting.
This is very different from the usual P&P! But I like it. Very much. Though I’m not sure I’d enjoy having a couple dragons watching me consummate my marriage.
Me either!
Intriguing.
While the notion of the tattoos is inventive and interesting, the scene itself is a bit unclear. How long does the tattoo take to be complete? Are they screaming the entire time? Is it screaming in pain or in ecstasy?
Perhaps the dream time where Kyra instructs Elizabeth should be relayed in some part to the reader? That way you could set out the rules for the magic system, needed dragon lore, etc to orient the reader into the world you're creating.